Would You Permit Me ? A Poem.

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ghulam muhammed
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Would You Permit Me ? A Poem.

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Unread post by ghulam muhammed » Wed May 04, 2011 5:48 pm

Poem by Nizar Qabbani-- Famous contemporary Arab poet

Would You Permit Me?

In a country where thinkers are assassinated, and writers are considered infidels and books are burnt, in societies that refuse the other, and force silence on mouths and thoughts forbidden, and to question is a sin, I must beg your pardon, would you permit me?
Would you permit me to bring up my children as I want, and not to dictate on me your whims and orders.
Would you permit me to teach my children that the religion is first to God, and not for religious leaders or scholars or people?

Would you permit me to teach my little one that religion is about good manners, good behavior, good conduct, honesty and truthfulness, before I teach her with which foot to enter the bathroom or with which hand she should eat?

Would you permit me to teach my daughter that God is about love, and she can dialogue with Him and ask Him anything she wants, far away from the teachings of anyone

Would you permit me not to mention the torture of the grave to my children, who do not know about death yet?

Would you permit me to teach my daughter the tenets of the religion and its culture and manners, before I force on her the 'Hijab' (the veil)?

Would you permit me to tell my young son that hurting people and degrading them because of their nationality, color or religion, is considered a big sin by God?

Would you permit me to tell my daughter to revising her homework and paying attention to her learning is considered by God as more useful and important than learning by heart Ayahs from the Quran without knowing their meaning?
Would you permit me to teach my son that following the footsteps of the Honorable Prophet begins with his honesty, loyalty and truthfulness, before his beard or how short his robe (long shirt/dress) is?

Would you permit me to tell my daughter that her Christian friend is not an infidel, and ask her not to cry fearing her friend will go to Hell?

Would you permit me to argue, that God did not authorize anyone on earth after the Prophet to speak in his name nor did he vest any powers in anyone to issue 'deeds of forgiveness' to people?

Would you permit me to say, that God has forbidden killing the human spirit, and who kills wrongly a human being is as if he killed all human kind, and no Moslem has the right to frighten another Moslem?

Would you permit me to teach my children that God is greater, more just, and more merciful than all the (religious) scholars on earth combined? And that his standards are different from the standards of those trading the religion, and that his accountability is kinder and more merciful?

TBG
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Re: Would You Permit Me ? A Poem.

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Unread post by TBG » Thu May 05, 2011 2:36 am

Bro GM,

Thank you and JZK

The beauty of the peom is in its simplicity, that highlights the essence of religion and not the outer covering.

S. Insaf
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Re: Would You Permit Me ? A Poem.

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Unread post by S. Insaf » Thu May 05, 2011 3:13 am

Brother GM,
Many thanks for sharing with us this thought-provocating poem.
The real charm of this poem is in ending the way it is ended.
If a poet like me had written it I would have ended it as:
I know, yes I know for sure,
You would not allow me;
because you are not God,
you are not religion.
You are trader in religion.
And that would have left it dry.

ghulam muhammed
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Re: Would You Permit Me ? A Poem.

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Unread post by ghulam muhammed » Thu May 05, 2011 5:18 pm

Thanks everyone, but the credit goes to the poet, I was only instrumental in reproducing his work here.